OH! strawberry smoothie how delicious you are.
I wish to drink you everyday but you are very expensive so It can't..
OH! strawberry smoothie how sweet you are.
I want to drink you everyday but it make me fat.
Why?? your body is made of sugar.
OH! strawberry smoothie how expensive you are.
your body is made by cheap material.
you didn't have strawberry. but you are too expensive, why?
the merchant secretly hoards the money.
Oh! strawberry smoothie I think you are very good.
Oh! strawberry smoothie I think you are very bad.
Oh! strawberry smoothie I think you make me happy.
Oh! strawberry smoothie I think you make me angry.
Yujung,
답글삭제I like how you use repetition in this ode. Try to use more personifications though. You should also edit your post before publishing it.
Hi!
답글삭제Nice ode to a strawberry smoothie. Please check the pictures before publishing the post! I enjoyed reading your post and keep up the good work!!
-Yongwook, Oh (Writing TA)
I can see your mind to have strawberry smoothie.^^
답글삭제I'd like to drink it too~~~
I think that you really like strawberry smoothie.
답글삭제I liked viewing you blog and I will come and see your blog next time, too.