2013년 1월 23일 수요일

cosmetic surgery

cosmetic surgery should not be allowed for vanity reasons.
Nowadays, many people want handsome or pretty faces.Therefore they care a lot about their face.and ugly people do cosmetic surgery.If you go to clubs, you can see that people's eyes are similar. some people say cosmetic surgery is good but I disagree with that.because of 4 arguments.

The first reason is the possibility of side effects occuring . Doctors are people and they can make mistakes. For example, they might put the wrong liquids in.
Then you might have wanted to shorten your face instead. it becomes an even longer face.If you want to be pretty that much do it, but there is a possibility that your face will become uglier.

The second reason is because it is insulting to your parents. They gave you your face.
If you don't like it and try to fix it, your parents will feel very bad. Also, It is betraying your DNA. you are really important because your face is unique. But If you do cosmetic surgery then you will lose your identity,and your face will become common.

The third reason is the possibility of death. cosmetic surgery is really dangerous. If the doctor makes a mistake, such as using the wrong sedatrves, you have a possibility of dying.
It would be very sad. If you wonted to become but instead you died.

The fourth reason is less of your own special attractiveness.Your face is unique, but if you do cosmetic surgery your face will be common and dull. It is really sad.I think having your unique attractiveness is really important.

In conclution, cosmetic surgery is bad because first, it can occur a side effect,second, it is insutting to parents; third, you might die, and fourth, it can make your unique qualsties disappear.

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  1. Yujung,

    This is a good essay and you make some good points however you need to support your reasons with links to evidence. I think it is also too short, you need to aim for 500 words.

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