2013년 1월 23일 수요일

cosmetic surgery

cosmetic surgery should not be allowed for vanity reasons.
Nowadays, many people want handsome or pretty faces.Therefore they care a lot about their face.and ugly people do cosmetic surgery.If you go to clubs, you can see that people's eyes are similar. some people say cosmetic surgery is good but I disagree with that.because of 4 arguments.

The first reason is the possibility of side effects occuring . Doctors are people and they can make mistakes. For example, they might put the wrong liquids in.
Then you might have wanted to shorten your face instead. it becomes an even longer face.If you want to be pretty that much do it, but there is a possibility that your face will become uglier.

The second reason is because it is insulting to your parents. They gave you your face.
If you don't like it and try to fix it, your parents will feel very bad. Also, It is betraying your DNA. you are really important because your face is unique. But If you do cosmetic surgery then you will lose your identity,and your face will become common.

The third reason is the possibility of death. cosmetic surgery is really dangerous. If the doctor makes a mistake, such as using the wrong sedatrves, you have a possibility of dying.
It would be very sad. If you wonted to become but instead you died.

The fourth reason is less of your own special attractiveness.Your face is unique, but if you do cosmetic surgery your face will be common and dull. It is really sad.I think having your unique attractiveness is really important.

In conclution, cosmetic surgery is bad because first, it can occur a side effect,second, it is insutting to parents; third, you might die, and fourth, it can make your unique qualsties disappear.

2013년 1월 20일 일요일

Merida



"Brave" movie is very funny and exciting.but, It is very sad and impressed to me.

I will tell you the story simply. Merida's prepared her too much also, her mother burned her arrow.so, she pleased to witch and she said 
" I want to my mother become change". so, her mother became bear because her mother eat some cake that witch make it.
but, she became human again, because of Merida's brave.

I think Merida is brave because of 6 reason.

The first reason is when 3boys shot the arrow, Merida shot the arrow herself.
her mother was really angry because she prepared a lot about Merida's active.
If she don't have brave, than she would not done like that.
also, she hate them and do like that so, we can definition about brave that said correctly or do it If you don't want  it.

The second reason is when some ghosts were appered, she follow it.also, she took a witch house and talk with witch.For example, witch said to Merida " If you don't buy anything I will kill you".most people are puzzled this situation, but she said loud to witch " I buy all" so, In this case you can know how Merida is brave.so, definition about brave that want to get more experience and get many curious, and want to solve it.

The third reason is when the bad bear tried to kill her.but that time also, she shot the arrow when the bear come to her.most people are puzzled and can't do anything. but Merida is different . she shut the arrow at the bear and tried to avoid herself. so definition brave is keep herself from dead.

The fourth reason is when she go to the dangerous cave that live the bad bear.
she want to get some Alphabet when most people go there they want to go out.but Merida get one purpose to get some Alphabet.definition bravery is when you get one purpose than you effort to success their purpose If it is dangerous.

The fifth reason is when her father tried to kill her mother and protect her mother.
this is brave and also It means Meria love her mother much. If you protect her mather and It have posibility that Merida is die.but she has brave so she can protect her mother.
definition the brave...is protect your love or important person through this Merida's situation.

The sixth reason is she crimbthe cliff when the movie was starting.most of people on't try it that crimb the high cliff.when Merida is simieal to fall, most people puzzled and very nervosly.but Meria had smile.
so, she have composure and bravery that she dosen't die. and she go up and enjoy the nature.
so, It was very ausome . definition the brave...is enjoy the dangerous things.

In conclution, brave's mean have six things.
First thing is you don't want to do it than said correctly or do it.
Second thing is want to get more experience and want to solve your curious.
Third thing is keep herself from die .
Fout\rth thing is you get one purpose than you effort to success their purpose If it is angerous.
Fifth thing is protect your love or important person If you have possiblity to die.
Sixth thing is enjoy the dangerous things .

so....Merida is brave girl!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

2013년 1월 9일 수요일

Ode about strawberry smoothie

Dear, strwberry smoothie,
OH! strawberry smoothie how delicious you are.
I wish to drink you everyday but you are very expensive so It can't..

OH! strawberry smoothie how sweet you are.
I want to drink you everyday but it make me fat.
Why?? your body is made of sugar.

OH! strawberry smoothie how expensive you are.
your body is made by cheap material.
you didn't have strawberry. but you are too expensive, why?
the merchant secretly hoards the money.

Oh! strawberry smoothie I think you are very good.
Oh! strawberry smoothie I think you are very bad.
Oh! strawberry smoothie I think you make me happy.
Oh! strawberry smoothie I think you make me angry.

2013년 1월 8일 화요일

My goal

Hello, I will tell you about my goal..
First, I want to improve my memorization skills.
I think....to achieve..
1 . make a goal to memorization somthing each day.
2 . Read a book in two weeks
3 . Eat walnutes to help with my memorization

Second, I want to improve my comic drawing ability.
I think to achieve
1.ask to Min-Yung how to draw comic
2.Read comics or webtoons
3.practice a lot 3 times a week

Third , I want to Learn new information
 I think to achieve
1 . Read a book In two weeks
2 . Listen ti the teachers
3. Ask a lot of questions


Thanks

2013년 1월 3일 목요일

answer

My name is yu-jung Lee.I'm from sung-nam.
first, Rin is my turtle's name.I don't know If Rin is female or male, but I want Rin to be female!!
she(?) always fights with the other turtle called Toru.it is my sister's turtle.
second,153 is my tall.....I'm too short..ㅠㅠ(this is not korean~it's only appered my feel)
third, Jenny is my sister's English name.she loves Roy Kim and animals.
Now, she takes care of hamsters, a parrot, and a turtle.
But!!!! I hate them all!!

2013년 1월 1일 화요일